Analysis Reflection

For my final draft of the analysis paper. I think I did a good job to analysis some specific words form the text and I did notice some little tense changes in the text which can bring different meaning of the text. I improved the introduction. At the first draft, my introduction was more descriptive rather than argumentative. However, I added one sentence into the paragraph and made it more argumentative. Moreover, I added more paragraphs which contains more analyzes. I think the only challenges I faced was that for this assessment we could not use outside sources and we could not use the background knowledge s of the author which made the essay a little bit harder to write. As I mentioned above, my strength was I did analysis many specific words and some little details of the text. My weakness should be the introduction for the essay overall  is hard for me to write. If I had more time, I definitely would re write my introduction again, and check every body paragraph to make sure the quotations are strongly supportive. 
3 things I get point: Quotes are used as evidence in body paragraphs
Quotes are correctly connected to sentences
Quotes are discussed and analyzed in body paragraphs
3 things I lose points: introduction catches the readers’ attention
Creative title
Essay is free of grammatical errors

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