Silent ent Movie first draft responce

 We finally finished our first draft of our silent movie. We really have a very long storyline and we have five scenes. The first scene, we tell a story that two friend that have to leave each other since one got a colleague appliance and other didn't. We came across a trouble when we filmed this, that we couldn't really see the appliance through the camera. However, we solved it by filming the scene, filming a single moment for the appliance and put them together. The second scene, we did that very smoothly, it is about one friend walks another to train station, I turned the speed of this scene a bit slower and I'd say it's sad. The third scene is simple and it's about they miss each other in different places. Moreover, we put some flashbacks in the middle of the scene, I think that would work very well. Also, we used different colors to show flashbacks and the "real" scene, that works also very well. The fourth and fifth scene is very confusing because the storyline gets a bit completing and it hard to show the storyline. It talks about they meet on the street five years ago, but they don't recognize each other. When they go back to their houses, the memories start coming up and they seem very depressed. We used two separated picture to show their emotion and we made two people appeared in one picture at the end. We want to show they are in different places and they all in the same mood but it is a bit confusing, so I have been figuring out how to do that.